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Dear Yazmine I like that you put lots of adjectives in your story about the chicks.What was your favorite part about the chicks?From Fatimah
Hi Yazmine,I really liked your writing because it was great & it sounded very good.Please write a bit more because I like you work a lot. Keep up the good work.From Gaylene:)
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Dear Yazmine
ReplyDeleteI like that you put lots of adjectives in your story about the chicks.What was your favorite part about the chicks?
From Fatimah
Hi Yazmine,
ReplyDeleteI really liked your writing because it was great & it sounded very good.Please write a bit more because I like you work a lot.
Keep up the good work.
From Gaylene:)